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The Coming Prophecy
Chapter 1
As
the morning sun sparkled in the sky, Charlie Summers strolled down the sidewalk
to work. He entered the lobby of the Casey Insurance Company and greeted the
receptionist. “Good morning,
Sandra.”
Sandra
glanced up, happy to see him. “Hello,
Charlie. You better watch out, I
hear the boss man is looking for you. But
I don’t think you’re in any trouble this time.”
“What
do you mean, ‘this time,’ I never get into trouble.”
She
looked down her nose. “Hey,
you’re talking to me. I’ve
known you for too long, so don’t try that sweet little boy act.
It doesn’t work around here.”
Charlie
grinned. “You’re right, I’m
just a bad boy. I guess I better go
to my office before I do get into trouble.”
They shared a laugh as he headed down the hallway.
Entering
his office, Charlie evaluated his professional accomplishments.
Though he hated to admit, it was nothing to write home about.
He immediately noticed a bright red envelope on his desk.
After ripping it open, he found the commission check from a large policy
he’d recently written and a note. “Great
job, Charlie! Keep up the good
work.”
Relief!
Charlie perked right up. Sometimes
a red envelope could mean bad news, but not in this case.
He had to share his good fortune with his best friend and coworker, Matt,
and hurried to his office.
Even
though Matt’s door was closed, he rushed in without knocking.
Matt
barely glanced up. He was too
consumed in a sheet of the lamest business leads he had ever encountered.
“What do you want?”
“What
do you mean, what do I want? I want
you to guess what this is,” Charlie replied, fanning the envelope in the air.
Matt
didn’t show any interest. “I
don’t know what it is, but I hope it’s your termination papers for barging
into my office like that.”
“No
way, my man. This magic envelope
contains the commission from the million dollar policy I wrote.”
“You
got lucky. I don’t know how you
got a thing off these nasty leads.”
“It
may have been luck, but I see it as party time tonight!”
“Then
drink a cold beer for me. I could
use one right now if you know what I mean.”
“Then
I’ll drink two. And don’t sweat
it, you’ll nab a big deal soon. But
I have to call Lisa, see you soon.”
Charlie
went back to his office and dialed a familiar number.
“Hello,
this is Lisa.”
“Hi,
pretty lady. How are you?”
“I’m
okay. I’m just working on a new
baby seat design. What are you
doing?”
“Hanging
at the office. Thought I’d call
to give you some good news. Guess
what happened.”
Lisa
heard the tone in his voice. “There’s
no telling with you, so tell me.”
His
delivery was smooth. “I just got
a fat paycheck so let’s play hooky and get naked.”
“I
can’t do that.”
“Why
not?” he pleaded.
“Because
I have to work.”
“That’s
no fun, so here’s my backup plan. Why
don’t we be adventurous and visit the shopping center tonight?”
“That’s
a wonderful idea! And since it’s
so pretty outside, we should go to the Santa Monica Mall.
We can even take a walk on the boardwalk.
We haven’t done that in a while.”
“Sounds
good to me. Get ready to have fun
and I’ll meet you at home after work. Love
ya.”
#
# #
Seagulls
drifted in the cloudless sky on this warm evening.
Hundreds of people crowded the sidewalks as Charlie and Lisa drove down
Main Street. Lisa stared at the
blue sky. “This is such a pretty
evening for the beach.”
“That’s
why I’m taking you. I only wish it was a little earlier so you could’ve worn
your new bathing suit.”
“You’re
so funny.”
“I
don’t think seeing you in a sexy bikini is funny.” He smiled and turned up the radio. The newscaster was announcing, “In the evening’s news,
terrorists explosions have erupted simultaneously in Baghdad, Saudi Arabia, and
Jerusalem, turning all three areas into a blood bath.
The dead have reached 347, with 968 wounded. Al-Qaida has claimed responsibility for the bombings.
Now to our local news. Two
drive-by shootings have claimed four lives in...”
“What’s
happening nowadays? This world is
getting crazier every day,” Charlie stated while turning off the radio.
“That’s
so true. A lady from my office was
robbed in front of a restaurant yesterday.
Some man jumped out from nowhere, stuck a butcher knife to her stomach
and took all her money.”
“That’s
terrible! Did she get hurt?”
“No,
she was very lucky. Some people
left the restaurant and it scared the guy away.”
“Wow,
that was lucky. It’s becoming a
full time job to be safe anymore, and you never know when your number is up.”
“That’s
so true. I wish I had an answer,”
she stated caringly.
Charlie
was thankful he had Lisa. She gave
him direction and made him feel good about himself. “There’s one thing I know for sure. At least we have each other.”
Lisa
adored the remark. “What am I
going to do with you?”
“You’d
be rich if you knew that answer.”
“Being
rich might be fun, but what will I spend all the money on?”
“That
answer is simple, whatever your heart desires.
And you better hold on because the beach is only a couple blocks away.”
Lisa grabbed the side door handle as Charlie punched the gas.
#
# #
Lisa and
Charlie were walking down the boardwalk, watching waves splash on the sand.
They held hands, enjoying the others company.
Lisa breathed deeply. The
freshness of beach air was fabulous after breathing office air for hours
everyday.
Charlie
nudged her gently. “Here comes
the sand.” Once they stepped on
the beach, he kicked off his shoes and dug his toes downward. “Oh, this feels marvelous!
Take off your shoes.”
Lisa
followed suit by digging her toes into the velvety sand.
“This does feel good.”
“Of
course, it does. I’ll never steer
you wrong. Now how about a walk
beside the water and then we’ll hit the mall?”
Lisa
nodded her head joyfully. They
moseyed down the beach. The
glistening waves captivated her, but her attention was pulled to a major storm brewing
miles away over the ocean. “Look
at that storm. Those clouds look
like they’re burning on fire.”
“Where
did that come from? It was a
beautiful blue sky just seconds ago.” He
bumped his hip against hers. “Well,
that’s out there and we’re right here, so let’s enjoy this fine
evening.”
They continued their walk, but Lisa kept staring at the menacing clouds. The sight gave her an uneasy feeling.
#
# #
A full
moon illuminated the sky as Charlie and Lisa drove into the shopping center’s
parking lot. Fortunately, it
didn’t take long to find a space. They
found one near the front and parked.
Charlie
patted her on the leg. “Here we
are at the ladies playground, the mall.”
They laughed, got out of the vehicle and walked casually to the entrance.
“What would you like to do first?
Go eat at your favorite Chinese place or do a little shopping?”
She
snuggled beside him. “I want to
go shopping.”
“I
think that can be arranged.” Once
they arrived at the department store, Charlie opened the large glass door.
“Let me open the door for the lady.”
Lisa
rubbed her body seductively against his while stepping past him.
“You are being sweet. There
may be some sugar in store for you later on.”
“There
better be because big daddy is getting hungry.” They entered the store, radiating joy.
After
shopping for a short period, Charlie picked out a couple shirts.
Lisa chose a bottle of eloquent smelling perfume and they set their items
on the sales desk near the front entrance of the store.
A
glass display case on the counter contained several strikingly attractive
crystal pieces, and Lisa feel in love with one in particular.
She opened the case to take out a perfectly carved crystal angel.
“Look, honey. Isn’t this
pretty?”
Just
as Charlie glanced over, a bright flash from a ceiling lamp shined on the glass
object, giving it a radiant sparkle. “That
is nice.”
“Can
I have it?”
He
pointed a finger at his cheek. “Plant
one right here and it’s yours.”
She
kissed him gladly.
“You
want it, you got it,” he beamed.
Lisa
stared at the angel. “This can be
our guardian angel.”
“If
that’s what you want it to be.”
A
loud commotion erupted at the back of the store. A sales person screamed, “Help!
Stop those thieves.”
Charlie
looked up. Danger was approaching.
“What the ..!”
Twenty
young hoodlums were running toward them, each carrying armfuls of merchandise.
It was a smash and grab free for all.
As
the thieves ran to the front door, one bumped forcibly into Charlie that knocked
him off balance.
Charlie
staggered slightly but regained his footing, then he made a vain attempt to stop
the kids. “Stop, you punks!”
Another
kid was running directly at him.
Charlie
saw it coming. He lowered his
shoulder and rammed full force into the thief’s chest, but the blow
inadvertently threw the assailant straight into Lisa.
The
contact hurled Lisa backwards, flinging the crystal angel high into the air.
It spun upward and then plummeted to the tiled floor, smashing into a
thousand slivers.
#
# #
Outside,
a change exploded in the atmosphere. Almost
instantly, bolts of lightning pierced the night sky while thunder quivered in
the darkness. A flood of clouds
rolled in, twisting and tumbling over the horizon like a tornado, suffocating
the stars and full moon.
In
a flash, darkness reigned supreme.
Street lamps everywhere were swallowed in the gathering haze, stealing the light of the world.
The Coming Prophecy was arriving.
The Dancer
Chapter 1
Sipping
his morning cup of coffee, James Knight enjoyed its robust flavor as he was
stuck in Los Angeles’ downtown traffic. A
sea of cars surrounded him. Before
he saw it coming, an automobile swerved in front of him and barely missed his
bumper. James slammed his brake
pedal to the floor, but the sudden halt splashed coffee on his lap that burned
into his crotch. “Damn!” he
yelled.
After
doing his best to clean his pants with a napkin, he glanced in the rearview
mirror and saw the San Bernardino Mountains towering in the background.
Fresh snow covered their peaks, making it a gorgeous sight.
James thought about grabbing his skis and heading to the slopes.
A vacation sounded wonderful, even a day off would be terrific.
He hadn’t taken one in such a long time.
Unfortunately
he was brought back to his current predicament when the car beside his blew its
horn aggressively. “Like that’s
going to help,” James stated matter-of-factly.
Since there was no escape from the freeway, he turned on the radio.
The sweet sounds of rock soothed him until he arrived at his exit.
Zipping
off the freeway, he drove into the parking garage of a large office building and
greeted the attendant, “Good morning, Pete.
How are things?”
“Pretty good, James. Thanks for asking.” Pete opened the gate while James replied, “Take care.” He parked, took the elevator to the seventeenth floor, and stepped to his doorway. A large brass nameplate read: O’Malley Accounting Firm.
James
shook his head. “Here comes
another exciting day of accounting.” Entering
the lobby, he greeted the receptionist with the same phrase as every morning.
Repetition was key for an accountant.
“Good morning, Lucy. Hope
things are well.” She responded
cheerfully, “Hello, Mr. Knight. Have
a nice day.”
James
smiled at her with an infectious grin. He
was blessed with a true gift, the ability to make others feel comfortable.
It could have been his pearly white teeth or his dimpled cheeks, but it
was probably the sincerity he illuminated.
He
headed to his office, sat behind his desk and before his bottom warmed the
chair, Susie, his secretary, entered.
“Good
morning, James. I hope you’re
ready to get started. I’ve
already had a funny conversation with one of your favorite clients,” she
giggled sarcastically.
“Oh,
no! I know that nasty laugh.
Go on and tell me, who’s being audited?”
“I
can’t hide anything from you. It’s
Mr. Pollock. He was yelling so loudly I had to hold the phone from my
ear.” Susie handed him a message.
“He said to give this to you.”
As
James took the note, he knew this could turn into a headache.
Robert Pollock always liked to get his way and pitched a fit when he
didn’t. He read the message out
loud, “This is the second year the IRS has messed with me!”
James sighed while dropping the note on his desk.
“I’m
sure you already know he wants you to phone ASAP.”
She stepped to the door. “What
would you like this morning? The
usual?”
“I
guess so.”
“It’s
always the usual. You should put
some spice into your life,” she joked playfully and strolled down the hallway.
“Okay,
you don’t have to rub it in.” James
enjoyed her sense of humor. They
have been working together for years with never a problem.
Susie was honest, trustworthy, punctual, and straightforward.
All the traits he admired in a person.
He felt lucky to have her on his side.
Just
when he began to read some paperwork, Susie entered holding a cup of black
coffee and a plain donut. She put
them on his desk. “Have you
called Mr. Pollock?”
“No,
I’ve been trying to put it off.” James
smiled, but she gave him the stare. “I
know. I’ll call him now.”
Susie left with a nod as he picked up the phone and dialed.
A receptionist answered, “Pollock and Petrie, can I help you?”
“Hello,
this is James Knight for Robert Pollock.”
He was transferred to Robert who exploded.
“What are you doing to me over there?”
James
knew his answer had better be satisfying. “Don’t
worry, Robert. I’ll take care of
everything. Have I ever failed you?
And look at the bright side, they say the second time is lucky.”
James should have stopped when he was ahead.
Robert
shouted into the phone, “Lucky, hell! This
is my second year of being audited. You
better do me right.”
“You
know I will. I’ll keep you informed.”
James hung up, relieved the conversation was over.
The intercom buzzed. “Yes,
Susie.”
“It’s
Johnny on line one.”
James
smiled; finally there was a buddy to help save the day.
There was no telling what type of story that crazy friend of his would
have. “Hey, what’s
happening?”
#
# #
Admiring
his tan physique, Johnny stood in front of a full-length mirror wearing only a
tight red and black striped g-string. He
was practicing exotic dance steps, swaying his lower body with the ease of
pendulum. This man was completely
uninhibited.
Johnny
knew how to drive his body, pulsating his hips toward the mirror with moves that
could bring the most reserved female to lusty titillation. He was good at what he did and made the money that proved his
talent. One hand held a cold beer
in one hand and the phone in the other. “I’m
well, but I need a favor and you were the first cat that came to mind.
My car is in the shop and I need a ride to work.”
“A ride
to work! What are you talking
about? It’s about time to sell
that car.”
“Be
easy, she just needs a little repair. That’s
what I get for shining her up too pretty and riding her too hard.”
“It’s
funny how you always compare everything sexually.”
“What
else would you expect from me,” Johnny remarked.
The light
on James’ phone blinked. “Hey,
I have another call coming in. What
time are you talking about?”
“Make
it around six and that’ll give us time for a beer.
Can you handle a cold one after work?”
“I
think I can manage that. And I’m
curious how many beers you need to do your job, Mr. Shake Your Moneymaker?”
James chuckled, but Johnny countered, “I have it better at the Sugar
Shack than you’ll ever imagine. See
you at six.”
“You
got it, buddy.” James hung up. A smile crossed his face.
Johnny and him went back to childhood.
They were partners in crime in elementary school and never stopped.
The intercom buzzed again. “I’m
almost afraid to ask who’s calling.”
“You
don’t have to worry about this one. It’s
Melissa on line two.”
“Oh,
good.” James pushed the button.
“Hello, pretty lady. How
has your day been?”
Melissa
sat in her apartment studying her freshly polished fingernails.
“No complaints. I did some
early morning shopping with my girlfriends and bought a few things.”
Her
voice had a different tone but he dismissed it.
“That’s nice. Did you
get a new outfit for this evening? You
know how fine you look in a tight little number.”
“No,
I didn’t get an outfit. And about
tonight, I can’t make it. Something
else came up,” Melissa retorted nonchalantly.
James
tried to curb his irritation. “What
do you mean something else came up? Do
you know how long it took me to get reservations at this restaurant?”
“I’m
sorry, James, but I can’t make it. My
friends want to go out and that’s what I want to do,” Melissa stated flatly.
James
was somewhat surprised, but more pissed. What
game was she playing this time? “Your
friends want to go out and that’s what you want to do!
Look Melissa, this isn’t the first time you’ve pulled this kind of
crap. This is supposed to be a
relationship, not an escort service that you use whenever you feel the need.”
“I’ve
already said I’m sorry. Maybe we
can visit the restaurant next week. I’m
sure they’ll still be open.”
“Next
week! Still be open!
What the hell are you talking about?”
James knew what had to be done. His
sanity was worth far more than this. The
aggravation she brought easily overshadowed the joy she delivered. “Every time we talk there’s a problem and I’m tired of
playing your games. Look, this is
it. Don’t call me anymore.”
James slammed down the phone. A
slight twinge of regret suddenly attacked him, but it quickly changed into a
sense of relief.
He
actually felt free of a heavy burden, like a black cloud of negativity was
blowing away.
Melissa
had been draining his soul like a leech sucking his blood.
This
was it. Her negativity just lost.
Past
relationships have taught James when it was best to back away and start over.
Inhaling deeply, he was thankful he saw her true colors now before
wasting any more time.
He
realized it was okay that Melissa wasn’t the right person for him, because one
day he would meet the lady of his dreams. One
that would steal his breath. And
hanging out with Johnny could certainly bring him into contact with a lot of
them. Johnny constantly bragged
about the women he met at the Sugar Shack.
James
laughed. He could only imagine what type of trouble Johnny would try
to drag him into tonight.
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